A continuation of an old idea I subbed, but completely new art. I need to work on some small details like the shapes and angles of the bows, but overall im pretty happy with it. Let me know what you think I could improve.

For Buck Hunter?



If so, I have no chance.



The only thing I thought of when I saw that Buck Hunter was just the typical camouflaged redneck. But this is beautiful. The true American hunter being native American.



Really great, 5.

nice I like it

holy shikes man! you keep getting better and better. not only is it a great illustration, but it looks phenomenal on the shirt!

fuck.



I give up. really really nice, maybe the muzzle in the "silhouette" could be more prominent (or exist) on the right behind that one hunter to complete the shape, but it's discernable either way.

thanks everyone

OMG! its so beautiful man!

man, why is this even in the critique section!? i was totally about to give it a 5 just now and realized it was in here



SUB IT NOW!

You make good arts.

i am personally im not a fan of the style/subject matter. but, your execution is really great. the only thing i would tighten up a little is to bottom center figure, it seems somewhat flattend compared to the depth you have in the rest of the composition. may sound like nit-picking or whatever, but you have taken the rest of this so far it seems like something you may want to correct? overall really nicely done!

the bottom center figure is so dark and flat looking do to the angle and lighting, i'll try to give him more depth, but it could be hard without cheating on the lighting

fan-tas-tic!

bump

awesome. this would make an EXCELLENT hoodie.

Well... that was me just dragging my sub into the trash icon for this compeition. Awesome work.

competition*

hey ste7en, looks awesome. maybe add a few of those horizontal grass lines to the bottom, but in the shirt color. to sorta break up the lower portion color and kinda fade it out a bit. but it looks great as is man.

thanks for the suggestions, I will try that out right now, and thanks for the support so far everyone else

my only problem is this is up against cbhuch's stag one....

i like em both. but one will win.

its not actually, his is in the josh ritter loves contest

oh. well then nevermind!

you're too fast, I drew something similar up a day ago and haven't had the chance to even get to the computer.



Excellent work.



I might try a dark bush behind the Indian for the deer's nose, just to see what it looks like.



It's just me, but I hate seeing more awesome designs on brown. I've got 3 already that I don't wear too often. I'd still mark $ though.

the design is awesome



the presentation could use some work. Like doing something about the empty space on the lower left. Gives a sense of unbalance.

final version, im going to submit when I get back

looks good! like the adjustments.

wait i just realized something. the indian right on top of the buck.

you should have the bow and arrow on the other side of the branch. cause it doesn't look like it would work otherwise....

well I already subbed it before seeing that comment, but I have no idea what youre talking about anyway...hopefully its not a big deal, but i dont see it

I love it... especially on a hoody. And on a dark brown. I like the dark brown in the photo better than this warmer brown you have as the background color in your design.

GREAT $5

^too late



i was going to ask - were you going for an effect where from a distance you would see only a big deer head (in the same profile as the deer in the center) - and up close you would see the images that make up the head?



or were you just going for a vaguely deer-head-shaped composition?



- if it's the first - i was going to suggest:

1) a red-brown shrub, partially obscuring the indian on the left - to extend the line on the "neck" - as it is now the space between his loincloth and the bend in his legs makes a distracting dark spot

2) taking away the bush on the right (extending the yellow area) and having that indian in a crouched position, back to us - to create a dark spot for the nose



and also

3) the archer on the left looks like he's aiming at the one in the middle and not the deer

I appreciate your comments, though ive already subbed, but just imagine the archer is still lowering his bow (the other one on the left hasnt even raised his, in an effort to show the scene is still in motion).



The idea was to create the a scene shaped like a deer's head with the same deer also in the center (the large shape is copied and blown up from the small shape). I didnt want the huters hidden so much as just not perfectly visible.

wonderful job, you was so creative

Great work, don't change a thing.