My original critique accidentally got deleted!! Here's a new one!!

I've incorporated a few new elements in V2. I think it's moving in the right direction!! There were a lot of great suggestions in my original WIP blog that i'm trying to use!! I had some good comments from JW and Tonteau on here orignally!! Sorry they got deleted!!

Yeh! the guys face on the right looks great! I love the triangle composition. Im wondering if the left guy is set too low?

Cool Idea...keep refining the images, though...they need to move from sketches to finished products!

it needs more overlaps....at this point everything seems to be

on its own

Thanks for the comments guys!! It is still in the "sketch" stage but i'm starting to refine some elements and tie them together. I think i've included a handful of people's suggestions from my blog! i hope you are digging it!!

Love it, especially the bank in the bg :D.