I'd say do away with the planet/satellite (or whatever that sphere is) and put 'em outside a window or something. Otherwise, I like the design.

Cute idea. Left-hand fairy's eyes don't seem to be looking at anything, though. She should probably be looking at right-hand fairy, since she's gesturing at her.

Very interesting style, it's got a cartoon retro feel to it, with very today colors. I like the gray version better. I think the red and the turq fight each other too much. Change the turd to a more muted version on the red. and maybe the cold as well...

please critique my design.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/70698/Running_Through_a_Field_Not_Stoping_to_Smell_the_Flowers

thanks :)