This is a WIP for the Loves Democracy comp. I just wanted to get your two cents on it and make any alterations. Cheers!

Bueller?

bling out a tooth?



on the side closest to us, there is a lot of pink bringing the top and bottom together. the same is not so for the opposite side, even though we should be able to see it.

gotcha. i'll post something new tomorrow. thanks chellz

I changed up the text to read "Free to be..". It's a bit more abstract but still conveys the idea of freedom of choice.



Please let me know what you think of this version. Thank you!

Hi Andrew.. I see you first version, and now the second. I agree with chelly's suggestion on the first version. I think she was saying to put some more pink on the far side as the closest, but to leave the blue space in the middle. And to be honest, I like the text on the first version. Anyway, this is cool concept and wearable !!! Cheers.



Please score and comment mine:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/171272/The_Puzzle



10x

ah yes, d-zign is correct oh my original intentions on the pink comment.



i'm torn on the text. i don't like long text but the other one looked a bit stronger.



i'm diggin the tooth.

I like the first version better because of the longer text and the blue space between the teeth, but the gold tooth in v2 looks great!

Which were you before you were an old carrier of the tattoo of 28 years?