Early sketch for a new idea I'm working on. Any comments / critiques would be great. Also, if someone can come up with a snappier name, that would be equally excellent.



Oh, and final figures will of course be clothed (in standard polo uniforms). I just learned to draw figures from comic books, and so I still build up as skeleton/musculature/etc.



Thanks!

haha, i see where this is going, and I love it! can't wait to see how the seahorses turn out!

haha, nice

I'm excited to see this take shape. I think your title is pretty good as is. Great idea



crit me please:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/26090/Olive_Branch_Politics

the early sketch looks good. maybe one could suggest Aquaman. you don't want to go all out and put him in there for copyright reasons, but he'd fit. my only initial comment is the guy up front looks really buff for a polo player...

It's looking good!



I can't think of any other names except maybe 'H2O Polo' which is basically the same thing as what you have.

good point about the first guy being too buff for a polo player... I'll be sure to slim him down a bit

Update showing general line style and beginning to block out color.

partial color update. any comments / crits would be great



Thanks!

Final? version (other than some cleanup)



Thanks to those who helped out so far - if anyone sees anything that needs to be tweaked, or has other ideas or suggestions, let 'em fly

I really like this... it's great. I'd wear it

I'd only change the eyes of the horses a bit...

I'm not sure about the color scheme; maybe yellow seahorses, to tie in the red, or a slightly paler green? Very cool design though! :)

awesome idea and nice clean vectors! only critique I have is maybe take out one of the riders and simplify a bit as it seems a tad busy. Please give me some advice is you have the time Nihilists

Great! I say submit it

I would really appreciate if you have time to check out and score my Totem

Awesome!! i like the concept and drawing. ifishes and everything is ok. i agree that you can change the colors

i would be really happy if you can vote and comment my design Smoky Whale. its last day for scoring!!

pretty awesome! when you get a chance check my design out :)giraffe

haha this is nice. submit!