accidentaly deleted my last critique of this design. here it is my stormtrooper, just a pun gone wild. what do you think ? what can i improve about it before i will submit it

that's dope. maybe throw in some other indicators of a coming storm in the backround like clouds and rain and stuff. nice work tho

please don't spam the designs/subs.

okay ... thanks for letting me know =)

This would look great on gray or a darker shade tee

i'm not actually sure about on what color it would look best ... but gray could work fine

Agree, a darker shade would make it look better :)

I love the concept, but maybe take it further. More storm and rain and thunder.



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Cool ! Very artistic, nice !

yeah, add some clouds or something to the background

great detail.. yes maybe you should try some clouds.. otherwise great!

updated version now with more energy in the clouds that his body is made of, might also add a few background elements, but actually my attempts on it did not work out to be looking good

this looks awesome now man, I love the linework

truth be told - you are ready! Sub this!

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SUBMIT THIS! I LOVE IT!

AMAZING. But does it have to be yellow?





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You can make it "blue-ish" and it will still look like lightning.

it's more a work that uses clishees and puns, and in that regard the lightning has to be yellow

just working on the presentation, the design itself is finished. what do you think about it ?

make the slogan at the bottom bigger - then it reasy to go!

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I like it, nice linework, for me its just slighlty too big on the T, also think it would look nice on a gray shirt..

final version

Hi again friend, love this design you have done a great job.



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oh man! this is so awesome!

I really hope it gets printed.

5$ from me once you sub it :)

this design is pending ...i hope they will let it get into voting =D

sweet trooper man. i really like the design

if you've got time http://www.threadless.com/critique/40107/The_Moo_nited_States