Hey guys, so this is basically a rough draft to see how people take the idea of the shirt and to bounce ideas off. Would it be a good idea to add a cherry blossom tree to one side of the design, and to push the geisha to the other side? I could have some blossoms falling in the air too...anyway leave me a comment and tell me what you think :D

I can only say awsome ...u spend some time on it and hard job was paid off...could u possible show us some placement also?

I would buy this.



can you give me some feedback please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46222/My_favorite_toy

Very nice work, great style! Maybe the beguiled dragon in a different color and extending behind her back or some texture/scales on the dragon's body would be a nice contrast against the smooth silk. Anyway, beautiful line work and color, keep it going. Cheers!

this is great! i agree with quister. ide like to see the dragon really emphasized, maybe wrapping around her waiste or arm a bit, with scales and more detail. awesome start, look forward to seeing more!



and thanks for spotting the mistake on mine, im going to make that change.

very awesome, cherry blossom tree would be awesome, it would be cool if maybe the blossoms and/or some of the outlines on the girl had like that ink spreading into paper effect like oldschool watercolor, very awesome design regardless...

My first impression is really sweet... I feel like she should be holding a fan...? And that maybe the dragon should be just a little more contrasted from her. A cherry blossom tree might be able to fit into the background, if kept simplistic.

bump

Great idea!!, I like the suggestions to make the draggon more detailed, and wrapping around the woman. The tree could be a nice element to complete the design...

love the colours and feeling of the figure - not sure about the dragon - doesn't have as much flow through 3D space as the kimono and geisha do.

the colours and the drawing are good, but I don't understand her legs, is she taking her feet in her hands ? or did you cut them ?

or you could put some colours there so we feel she's on the ground..

hope it helps!

i like your colour in the clothes

ok so this is just for the purposes of placement appearance and color...what do you guys think?

oh and sorry, but for some reason the image quality made the picture blurry :/

Works for me. I like it a lot.



Check mine if you get a sec.

The bottom of the dress is a bit strange, it's not melding into the design, so it feels like she has no legs. Other then that it is a great illo.



Crit me please?



MEGA BURGER

I really like your style! I feel like it should blend a little better with the shirt color somehow. But other then that- I think it's splendid.



Check mine out if you have an extra moment:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46427/Splatter_Pattern

I think the splash behind her isn't helping the design. Maybe stylize/ detail the dragon more?



Also, try another colour tee. That grey doesn't do the image justice.



Could you maybe also critique mine? It's Castles of Sand V8.



Oh, also, if you haven't yet, i'd love a vote/ comment on my submission Psychedelic Soup.



Tell your friends :P



Thanks!