My first submission.

Everyone has a little worm inside them! n__n

that is pretty cool i might add a litte color to the worm and/or the shirt

comment on mine please!!!

Rather than having a random splotch of holes, I'd have the worm just threaded in and out around the shirt. This has potential, though.



Please take a look at a design that I'm working on:



The Original Pixel Art

thanks guys, the original version of this is on blue . is that any better?

I think the original looks better with the blue. I do think this one has potential though. The extra holes work, it adds extra visual interest. Just add some color to the worm or the inside of the holes.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/55435/Smooth

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55183/Family_Business

Okay boos, that okay boos. :) It's okayboos.



If you want to color the worm fine, but I would wear it like that to.

I'd keep the worm white, but have a more colourful shirt. It's a fun design, so don't have it on a pale, boring colour. Stand out!

It looks great on blue even without that gradient without. Make it on blue shirt and hit send. :D



don't wait someone will copy you.

And don't listen to people who are putting their links behind their advices LOL!!!

I don't think you need to add colour to the worm, but some shading would be nice, i think it would really make the worm pop! This is a really cool design, and I would definitely wear this shirt!

i've got one too:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54637/Royal_Flying_Machine

yeah i reckon worm should stay white, but put it on a darker tee for contrast.



thanks olja - i think i'll do just that :)

My first submission.


Everyone has a little worm inside them! n__n

My first submission.


Everyone has a little worm inside them! n__n

fixed up again....

i like it...whitout correction!!



Zen

I prefer the colours of the first version. It's a cool image, the style has a nice simple, casualness to it.

I like it. Very nice work. Submit it.



Feedback is always appreciated:

The Usual Suspects

Yup, blue works :)

More contrast...and it definitely differentiates the foreground & the background.

I reckon make the shadow underneath like a dar blue, and maybe some shadow on the worm



crit mine?http://www.threadless.com/critique/55522/Nothing_but_a

I agree. some shading and drop shadows will add some nice depth to the illustration. This is a great concept though.



check mine out

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55523/Design_a_baby

thanks...