I don't really get it. Why is it called what it's called?? The snake looks pretty cool, but I don't get why it's coming out of a calculator and getting ready to eat that squarish thing. Perhaps make your design more relative to the title??

Critique my design?

that's no calculator :D that's a phone.. ok, my bad, here's what's going on in here. it's all about a telephone game called Snake, there's also Snake 2 - this is The Snake Future, like a fantazy of a 3D game, where snake gets all real and does not look like some line.. the food however remains the same - ''squarish'' :D was gonna send it in gor innovation contest.

haha i love snake, that game srsly rules :) so there for i love this design :)





help?

click!

the drawing is light, so I put it on darker shirts, also made the ''bait'' smaller and colored ir white, black and white with black borders.. what you think?

i like how it looks, but the idea is a little banal and too plain. for example, this object the snake reaches for could be more meaningful? so that there are more parallels between game and life

yes, I'l explane it to you when you come over! :D actually the object is left in it's game-shape for drawing to say ''game Snake'' not ''animal planet'' cause these little squarish things are what the snake eats! it don't eat no birdies! :D

nice idea... maybe you need some more work on the phone graphic

reworked the phone, big thnx to Alice! ;)) any ideas?

ideas?

I would get rid of everything except for the snake (which is drawn very well) and the + .

The perspective of the phone and the snake look odd.

Cool idea though.



Could you please check mine and give me some advice -



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56470/Henry_the_80_s



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56462/G_raffes



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56466/Pope_rock_musical

I'd like to hear your thoughts on phone, does it look Ok? compare to previous version..

yes, better! :) maybe you also have to work on the part where the snake comes out of he screen

damn, what's there to work on, it just goes out :D can you elaborate on it?

The snake looks 2D and the phone is3D. Try putting some shading or something so he's coming out of the entire screen, not just pasted to the left hand side of the screen.

thanks!