I was listenig 'Children of Bodom' when I got inspired to do this :p

****With the bubbles, or without?

***concept its fine?

***size and placement ok?

please coment this! hahaha i´m ansious to submit, but it have to goes everything perfect! thanks^^

awesome illustration style... you hit the nail on the head... submit this as is...



check out my critique:

theory of contradiction

but with, or without the bubble???

With bubble!

Aye, with the bubble, but maybe pu the holes back in the letters - maybe even skull shaped holes :D

i´ll post another option of color latter...i´m doing some changes

thanks!

i like the skull idea :p

ah, this is hilarious.

there is just a few things that I think need some work... the caption, first of all, seems a bit odd... maybe something like "I thought I did you already", ""Aww, not another one", "I thought I took care of you..." something like that (lol mine are kinda lame)

anyways... love the text you used ^_^ keep it!





And just Grim's face, a little more menacing. but still make it quizzical...



AWESOME concept and design dude, this better win! ^_^

skull idea is cool...

i think it would be a good idea to lay it out how you have it...

showing a version with and without the text...



check out v3 of theory of contradiction

thanks guys, i think i know what to change now...i´ll post a second version later to make shure everything is fine

new title

***LONG LIVE THE KING!***

i change the text, and add some details...i gess it´s way much better now

thanks everyone who help me...it´s in final retouches

aye .. much better, nice one!

AWesome! $5 go for it!

this deserves some love

I say no bubble, it doesn't need it. The image says it all. If you really wanna leave the bubble in then change the type you're using.

I think its a solid concept, and really nice illustration. I agree that it doesn't need the text.

Instead of text the reaper should be scratching his head.

I don't really like the background or how Death kind of dissolves. I think he would look good fading off but the way you did it makes him look too fairy-magical rather than demonic-magical. Just my opinion. The rest of it looks great though.