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i like the idea, but not the type treatment...also maybe if the skates were colored....or if not colored, empty so you could see the shirt color through the skates?
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you lose the 'r' in roll when it's behind the skates like that. looks like, rock noll. fix that, center it on the chest, and this will be perfect for any 80s party!
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leave the skates alone, they're best white like that. but the text needs to be uncovered a bit cause like the others said, it looks like rock 'n oll.
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agree with all that said it looks like Rock n Odd. Pull the R in Roll out from behind the skates a bit.
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About my design
it's my 3rd design submission here at threadless - i hope you like it.. :)