This is Stevens. He has lived an exciting life. He always gets a little emotional when he realises that he is already on life 9 and has just one last chance to get it right. Here he is telling you how the first 8 ended. There was the time that he got ran over by a car. Then he got himself all hung up in the curtains. He got his head trapped in a mouse trap. He's electrocuted himself while making toast. Then there's the time he fell asleep while enjoying a fire. He's had a heart attack from being scared by the neighbors dog. He accidently ate poison and let's not forget when he slipped in the bath and smashed his head. Those were the first eight and now that he is on the last one... OH HOW GOOD IT IS TO BE ALIVE!

its a good idea

but i cant even tell whats going on in the mouse trap one

and the one of him talking is weird looking (his face)

i also dont like that i can see that dogs weiner

I think that this is very fun...it reminds me of those vinyl peel and stick storyboards from childhood. Great colors too. Don't worry too much about dog weiners tylers0421; they're just dog weiners.

I agree about the mouse trap img, but I'm all about dog weiners. erm, I mean I'm fine with one on a t-shirt.

Interesting... has a bit of a Charles Addams/naive art feel to it. The bright colors are the perfect antidote to the grim subject matter.

I do like this....but I also like cats....it's cute...I would wear it

I love the story idea. The pictures are a little confusing (especially the mouse trap one). The dog is great (similar shape of a doberman - of which I have two), but the wang showing isn't necessary. Either way I would wear it.

I like the idea, just dont like the way is presented...I dont know, maybe like a comic or giving it some order...i dont know... 4

morbid - I love it!

The fork in the toaster made me laugh out loud.

i like it.......but it took me awhile to figure it out.....

i like it buy i feel it could be fleshed out more. like the curtain and mice are a little flat. and few aren't immediately transparent to why stevens died.A giant mouse trap with the cat in it could be more ironic. at the very least make the death look more dynamic looking

The last line was supposed to read: At the very least make the deaths look more dynamic to put that final touch on it. Looks awesome. i'd buy it.

FUN stuff

I don't get the one where he's tied up by the curtains. Is he just going to starve to death?

Oh, and move the electrocution one so it's not so close to the tire tracks. The squigglly lines together dominate the design.

I like the toaster best....super funny!

Thanks for all the great feedback so far. There are a lot of good suggestions in there! I agree that it has to be fleshed out a little more. One day I would like to go back and try again because I think the concept is really good and the potential is there.

Utah beach, he's going to choke to death! That's why you can't let your cats play with those things. ;p



I really love this design. The only thing I didn't understand at first was the dog one. I thought the cat was in love with the dog and it killed him. Which I kind of liked better than knowing he had a heart attack from fright. Still, it's a great design!

My cat would totally stick a fork in a toaster. :0

I thought the cat had committed suicide in these eight lives...

cute idea, but better, clearer illustrations please. otherwise, it'd be a 5

Super duper funny. It makes me laugh out loud. Awesome ideas!!! Poor little Stevens.

The mouse trap one is confusing and I don't like the placement but, other than those two small details, nice work.

Although... he is nake din all of them escept the bath tub... eh?

**naked in

**except.



Geez, sorry, can't type.

Man I love this cat. His whiskers look like a huge mustache. I love that his eyes are always closed. Very very awesome.

I like your concept. And it is funny because it reminds me of my cat. I think the images of being run over by the car and the mouse trap one need to be a bit more clear. Just by looking at it, I couldn't tell what they were about.



I still love your idea=)

i like this, at first i had no idea what was goin on, then i realized after the fact, i love shirts like this, good stuff!

Thanks for all of the great comments on this one. I will try and rework it in the future. I love the concept and I think that with all the great feedback that this could get even better. Thanks again!