Duel reworked
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Mar 06 '08
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The concept is awesome, but the lines need some work. I'm not scoring that high but I would love it if you work on it some more and resubmit. It has a lot of potential. Did you ever put it up for critique?
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this wolf looks way better than the first one, nice.
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love the colors use
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I agree with loganwagner - i really like the concept and I would definitely buy it.
But I think the lines need some work as well, I dont know the wolf isn't just doing it for me, and the details of riding hood and the wolf seem really different. I really like the idea of the black with the spurt of red overlapping the window. Such a nice idea, but definitely needs work. |
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brooooootal.
i love it. pa pa pa PRINT! |
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i like it, but i would expect a little more color.. maybe a moon and some dark blue clouds, just my .02
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I hate to make you re-work it again, but I'd still work on the wolf more, maybe bigger with the ears slanted back, more angry with drippy teeth...and a smidgen more detail on her red cloak thing...i'm loving the design concept still...
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i like the wolf in this version, no need to change i think,
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everything is good. a knife, behind the back would be 5$
great concept |
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mayeb do the ears back like Embryo said, but it looks fine like ths! $$$5
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I really like the concept, and I LOVE how the red pops against the black/gray.
Everything seems a bit flat, though . . . I would suggest adding touches of white along a few select edges, both on the wolf and the riding hood (like highlights from a bright full moon) to increase the dramatic quality and add some depth. Solid concept and drawing! |
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Nice!!!
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i liked your first a lot, but i like this one too, nice work! $5
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Wolves!!!!! I would buy. I love the dark feel to it.
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seeing as how the trees and riding hood were designed with just shapes, not lines, i think the wolf needs to be done like that too.
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I think JJsart had a point it´s missing something. A knife or something like that might clearly show shes fighting a battle and not just turning around.
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big and bad - 5$
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the thing that bugs me about this is the difference between the wolf and everything else. everything else is a very nice and simple and then the complexity of the wolf seems out of place. great design and idea but it needs a little work.
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i want!!
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Wow! This really stuck out from the ones I've been rating tonight. I would so buy this.
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Oh I love this image, I would totally buy this if they printed it. I love the red of Little Red Riding Hood, it really pops!
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wwhooaa it scares me. i love it.
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Wowww. Very, very cool!
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I think the girl needs a knife or something similar, and that the wolf and girl could use some highlights to make them stand out more against the background. I also think the cloak could use more detail.
For now, $3. |
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ditto everyone's comments re: wolf and cloak detail. also maybe some alteration to the wolf's eye? (he seems a little squinty for someone's who's supposed to hear "my what big eyes you have")
otherwise like the idea and colors and i'd buy it. |
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i love he colors.
i think its perfect the way it is. awesome job $5 |
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Agree with most of the above comments, but my main issue was I didn’t see the wolf at all at first. The red draws the eye so strongly you lose the wolf. Perhaps if it was a white wolf, it would catch the eye and balance the image better. Or if you wanted to go simpler, to match the simplicity of the rest of the image, maybe just a black silhouette of a wolf with white or even red highlights to draw the eye?
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http://www.threadless.com/submission/138959/Duel
I reworked the wolf.