It's fun to scribble!

you had fun with a wacom. good for you.

Indeed.

I like all the little designs, but I would suggest another color besides white. I've owned shirts like this and I don't think they do well on white

I do like the style.... but not enough to buy!

$5

Beautiful

This looks like the pages of every notebook I had throughout high school and college (sadly). I'd buy it.

Plus, I always made those page holes into stuff too. Or at least couldn't resist coloring around them.

nice work mister

lol @ time and profit that are inverted. Now you can come back from the future.

I never thought I'd miss school. 4

i love it ...

Put that cactus with glasses on a shirt and I would buy the heck out of it!



It's fun to look at, and it made me smile, and remember all the times I did stuff like. I like the front better than the back though, and I don't think I would wear it as a shirt. 4

Quite literal sketchy designs seem to be all the rage on Threadless right now. And guess what, i love them all so far! Great use of both sides and really nice way to integrate those noteboook corner-scribbligns in to a cohesive shirt.



4$

so great! i love it! $5

GOOOOOOOOOOOD 5*

wow, i dig it. $$5

your my fave artist on threadless, no joke i looked at all the designs i gave scores too, all $5 :D

Nice idea. It looks great!

awesome, i want one right now! 5$

i think this is lots of fun

$$$$$

I like it!

i can't help it, i just love it.

this is so cool!!!

I really can't find anything to change!

kudos.



take a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/20104/Girl_of_the_Future

Like it a lot. making a shirt into a notebook is what bought me $$

The @ symbol on the hangman game sells this. Bwuahahaha.

I like it!!!



It looks like my notebook!!!

I gave you a 5!!!!

some of the individual things made me laugh...like pajamasquid said, if you made that cactus guy his own design that would be too awesome for words!!!

I love this!!!!!!! $5

I'd $$BUY$$ this!!!

I love it. Five buy.

Dude that's cool! I definitely see your illustration style shining through this. It's in the bunny type characters. I like this t-shirt, $5!

And keep designing, you have a great style!

GREAT $5

fantastic 5$

OHMYGOD this is the coolest shirt i've ever seen! This totally describes me and my friends.

$5

cool!!

haha, awesome.

Thanks for the positive comments thus far guys, I'm really taking a lot of things on board from the critique as well!

interesting for sure....nice

I feel like these notebook scribble/sketchy designs are more appealing when they really feel authentic... This looks so slick that it almost feels like a parody of them. I really like elements of it, but I feel like the whole is less than its parts.



I love the rabbit guy character, he's a scene-stealer.

Fun $5

nice

mmmeeehhhh



I'd like a maths homework sheet :P

it's brilliant but i dun like white shirts

i love white shirts!!!

HAH! That's a 5!

Totally Tubular!



$5

awesome.



but being the picky type, i agree with something someone said somewhere lol....mainly about the piece o paper itself. I think it could possibly look better if the illustrations sat on a more realistic looking piece of binder paper (like, one that was ripped out of a binder, scanned, and colored...like the lines blue)



it might make it look more like an actual piece of binder paper that you tore out of a notebook. The lines and the circles of the piece of paper look created by hand. im saying keep the illustrations the way they are (looking like they were created by hand) and the piece of paper more realistic (ie. scanned)



i could totally be wrong of course. (probably am lol)



either way, awesome design! ill give it a 5.



i could totally be wrong of course.

i LOVE it! always lovin the scribble graphic!

definitely a 5!!



=p

I think the scribble idea should be ALL over the shirt, not just the spaces provided in the front and back.

ha i love the humans being walked by the rabbit and shit

-----------------------------------------------------------------$$$$$

55555555555555555555555-------------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

55555555555555555555555-----------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

55555555555555555555555-------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

5555555-------------------------------------$$$$$$$$$------------$$$$$$$

55555555------------------------------------$$$$$$$$--------------------$$$

55555555555555555555------------------$$$$$$$$--------------------------

-------------------55555555-----------------$$$$$$$$$$-----------------------

--------------------5555555-------------------$$$$$$$$$$---------------------

---------------------555555----------------------$$$$$$$$$$-------------------

---------------------55555-------------------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$-----

--------------------55555----------------------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

-------------------55555----------------------------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$$---

-------------------5555-----------------------------------------$$$$$$$$$$$

55---------------5555----------------------------------------------$$$$$$$$$

-55555555555555--------------------------------------------------$$$$$$$$

-----------------------------------------------------------------$$$$$$$$$$$$

---------------------------------------------------------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$

----------------------------------------------------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

-----------------------------------------$$$$$-----$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

--------------------------------------------$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

---------------------------------------------------------------$$$$$-------------

(o_o) wow.... this brings back memories. I love it!

I'd buy it!

I'll give you a 5