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Francesa

About my design

by Francesa
Love is in the cards.
st.patrick
st.patrick on Jan 02 '09
I'd probably love it with more cards, more jettons (is that what they're called?^^) , like a big bunch of poker all over the shirt. Please try it once more as a critique!!
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Jan 02 '09
When all the chips are down, this is a great shirt.



Nice job!!
brentendo
brentendo on Jan 02 '09
I like the simplicity of it combined with the detail of the face card and chips, well balanced
maariaa
maariaa on Jan 02 '09
all in
Bloo Devil
Bloo Devil on Jan 02 '09
I agree with saint patrick, try it as a critique again, its good idea but why is there only 4 cards? I cant think of a version of poker where you only have 4
Bloo Devil
Bloo Devil on Jan 02 '09
I just saw the LOVE Im retarded, scrap that last comment! LOL
zomboy99
zomboy99 on Jan 02 '09
poker is 5 cards?
zomboy99
zomboy99 on Jan 02 '09
should make it a royal flush or something of the like....
zomboy99
zomboy99 on Jan 02 '09
aaaaaaaah yes i just saw the love too.... but then, this is a bit non sensical just the same dont you think, poker is 5 cards....
run2home93
run2home93 on Jan 03 '09
Oh Sweet!



I would buy that :P
Francesa
Francesa on Jan 03 '09
A fifth card just barely sticking underneath the 3 could be easily added. It wouldn't have to show a number.
squatterjohn
squatterjohn on Jan 03 '09
I've seen this done on ffffound. I think it works better in the photo as it's much tighter. There could be a fifth card cropped out of shot and it draws your attention to the fact that it says LOVE. You don't have the full cards distracting people. A lot of people have missed that about this. That could work for subtlety, but perhaps it's a little too subtle.
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Francesa
Francesa on Jan 05 '09
I hate it when a good idea was thought of by someone else too. But the photo you referred to and my design are different enough I think this qualifies as original.

I could make the letters/number slightly bigger. Would that make the "LOVE" obvious enough?
Ivantobealone
   Ivantobealone on Jan 05 '09
clever!
Maritta
Maritta on Jan 07 '09
This is clever! It's nice that it isn't so obvious..
Aweb1492
   Aweb1492 on Jan 08 '09
I like 52 card pick up...that game rules....too bad not many people fall for that one anymore....
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Wimbs E_soul
Wimbs E_soul on Jan 11 '09
great idea right on

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forceofvolcanos
forceofvolcanos on Apr 24 '09
Well, GIMCA had a design a lot like yours, slightly different idea.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30412/POKER

And hamikinsteph had this one.

http://www.twww.threadless.com/critique/4784/Cats_playing_Poker

Although his has been done (sort of) all of those designs got a bad score and none of them were printed so you may not appeal to anyone.



I think you need to put a bit more personality into your cards (check a book on cartooning out of the library - it might be really helpful.)



The other thing you might think about is why do you have poker on your shirt?







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jnjmitchell
jnjmitchell on May 17 '09
Cool! I never even realized that you could spell that word convincingly with cards!
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